This is the elegy that I wrote. It definitely needs some work. I may change the poem entirely, but these are the thoughts that came to mind after her recent death. Any feedback will be glady accepted. Thanks.
Elegy for My Mother
Oh mother! Caregiver! A friend I can call.
Determined and strong, great example to all.
Full of compassion, honor and endless love.
You were bold and full of pride, undoubtedly a gift from above.
Struck by illness you refused to fall or cry.
You would give the poor your last penny.
And your intelligence molded many.
You gave us all your time.
You instilled in us hope and bliss.
Our intelligence you never undermined.
Your body has given in; the fight you fought was won.
Now you may rest in peace and feel at ease.
Your work on earth is done.
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