Sunday, February 21, 2010

# 16... Conversations with God (Pt1)

Talking to God

I feel like I am drowning.
I see no sight of land.
I fear there is no one to save me.
I'm sinking fast in quick sand.

I'm all alone.
I scream out loud.
I feel no one can hear me.
My voice is lost in the huge, vast crowd.

I am at wits end.
Have no zeal for life anymore.
I want to stop this pain.
I knock at Heaven's door.

My friends have left me alone.
They refuse to hear my plight.
I have nowhere to turn.
I've lost the will for life, I've given up the fight.

The end has come.
I've lived as long as I could.
Please hold my hand,
As you promised you would.

1 comment:

  1. This was my first attempt at the Catronette given to us by Brittany... I did not like this one too much, but I thouhgt that I would post it anyway... I will post the second part, which is what I submitted in class so you guys could get the full idea of the poem.

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